One of the best...
on newgrounds....very creative! Beyond my imagination!
I enjoyed the raw and gritty linework of this toon. It was a good start but it seems more like you are interested in testing out your flash skills then developing a story, which I can understand and has its own merits...I think if you continue to develop your line work and attention to detail you will really have something going! Can't wait to see more!!
I really like the layout of your stage. Putting the animation inside the image of a photograph creates a sense of intimacy with the characters. Combined with the simple line work of the character designs and animation, you have created an irresistable visual piece, however I do think the comedy needs some work as I really felt you were trying too hard to create dialogue that would resonate as being cool and edgy then trying to make the situations funny!
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